Revision!

So i'm talking about my rough draft versus my final draft. The only legitimate thing i can say about looks were length. The final draft was longer than the rough draft and far better for it. Not many major revisions were made to the paper aside from grammatical errors and an extension to unfinished ideas. My error patterns were what would be common of someone who rushes their writing so to save time which makes sense with me at the wheel. My guide to making revisions were simply correcting errors in grammar that I overlooked whilst rereadng. My strongest aspect was probably the meat of the paper not the beginning and the end but the whole center of it, I felt successful as a story teller.